Updated. Added vocal cuts on drop (1st and 2nd drop has different melody) and build up section right before the 2nd drop. And deleted the 2nd break. Thanks for listening. :) https://soundcloud.com/twok2 .

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Spinnin Records
Spinnin' Records 3 years ago

Although the track has got a relaxed, dreamy vibe to it, we miss a bit of energy in the build up. There's not much more happening than a typically tropical-house-feel-good-melody-line. Try to add a little vocal to the arrangement, or hooky vocal cuts for instance. We would suggest to remove the part between 1:49-2:03 and make it explode at the second drop (in a tropical, relaxed and dreamy way of course ☀)

Score: 7
twok
twok3 years ago

Thank you so much Spinnin' for the feedback!
I will work on that and update the file as soon as it's finished. I wish that you listen to the new version too. Thanks again!

Score: 3
twok
twok3 years ago

Hi, new version is now online. I added vocal cuts on drop and build up section before the 2nd drop. I made two melody lines for each drop. Hope you listen to this new one. It was fun working on this new arrangement . Thanks!

Score: 1
EnergyWolf
EnergyWolf3 years ago

Great Work I voted :)
But vote me back
EnergyWolf: Progressive House ID2
Ty:) I give my Pawn:):)

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Krimsonn
Krimsonn3 years ago

Hey twok, I really like the vibes you transmit with this track! I VOTED for it! I would appreciate it if you could vote for me as well.

It is my only track under the label “Tracks” in my profile!

After all, it is all about supporting each other, right? :)

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Trennik
Trennik3 years ago

voted for you :)

please listen to my remix of Coronas "Rhythem of the Night" an vote back if you like it!

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Anonymous3 years ago

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Nikzad & Sina
Nikzad & Sina3 years ago

First Of All We're Appreciate of your support and cooperation . we would love to have you stay tune with Us,.,,

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Serdar Bingol
Serdar Bingol3 years ago

Nice track dude . I like it . Keep going like that . Voted ..
Please check out my new track " Boomerang " . Thanks ..

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PAUL&PANCHEZ
PAUL&PANCHEZ3 years ago

аwеsоmе! vоtеd! vоte bаck my trаck- I DARE YOU!!!

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Marky V-lectro
Marky V-lectro3 years ago

Voted, Twok!

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ZTSky
ZTSky3 years ago

аwеsоme! vоted! vote bаck my track - Custodes! follow me and i follow back, best regards ZTSky! :P

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Léo Ben Salem
Léo Ben Salem3 years ago

voted ! please vote back

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sgzhr3 years ago

voted, please vote back!

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Freak DJ
Freak DJ3 years ago

Great track,voted. Please vote for my remix of Alan Walker - Faded. Thanks

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Arys
Arys3 years ago

Good!
VOTED ; )
Please,vote Arys -Twitt lite

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Firepad3 years ago

VOTED ! Really nice track ! I think it should be higher in the ranks or don't drop even a little. Pretty good melody, nice bassline, powerful and well mixed kick. awesome overall effort, really sounds like a release material. Keep it up and good luck in future ! Also, could you take a minute and vote back for my track 'NIGHT DRIVE' ? I would be really grateful ! Thanks in advance :)

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Nikzad & Sina
Nikzad & Sina3 years ago

Your Track Deserve It And You Have Our Vote! Follow Artist,We Will Appreciate You Checking Our Track

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ope63 years ago

Gran pista, votada por favor vote por mi cancion Es La Primera de mi perfil.......................

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LAMS3 years ago

AMAZING TRACK, I think it's very original track and really have my vote, I hope to have the same with their vote in my song, "LAMS BIPOLAR DAY" all chasing the same dream and the purpose is to support everything will be great and fulfill our dreams, bro count on your vote;)

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LEB
LEB3 years ago

Good track ! voted!

Score: 1
Sam KaYY
Sam KaYY3 years ago

Great Job There on the track..
Voted! Check my supporting track if u
don't believe me
And Vote for my Track Named IMMORTAL on The Profile Plzz

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