Thanks for this one! The vocals of both verses lack a bit of energy. Try to create a catchy melody line for it. Also, the melodyline of the vocal singing 'could ever get' goes down while you actually sing something positive, so the melody should go up too. Also, keep an eye on the tuning! The chorus is nice, and we love the 'come baby come'part! Nice job so far!

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