My second track "Erased". I wanted to see if I could make a second track and practicing EDM. I don't expect this to rank high up in the charts however I still wanted to submit it because from here it gets a lot better and I am still proud of this track. Enjoy!
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Ruben Savir
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4 years ago
Voted... Check out my track "My Hood". Your support is greatly appreciated.
PLEYSY
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4 years ago
Very nice! I voted for you! Check out my latest Track "Till The End" on my profile!.. Hope you like it too:)
Niklas Kling
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4 years ago
IAMAR - You doing the right to subit your demos. Getting feedback is the way to keep on developing as an producer.
In my opinion you're on a good way forward. You fill out the track and empty spaces well.
I would say that when the drop comes, you need to boost it more with energy and lower the arp and chords and let the leads do its job. Maybe chop the bass too?
I'm impressed anyway.
I give you my vote for the effort and the idea is great! :) Hook me up if you wondering anything. I love helping new producers with what I can ofc. :)
iAmar
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4 years ago
Thank you Niklas Kling, for the feedback. I made this track some months ago and left it because I didn't really know how to make it better at that time and I couldn't figure it out how to make it better. Chopping the bass at the drop could work and I think I need to layer the instruments more as well to give it more power. I didn't really think about filling the empy spaces in this track at all, but that really is a great tip.
Thank you for the support :)!
DavidXUX
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4 years ago
Voted!!! All in all this track is really good!!! I mostly like the drop because of the great energy in it!!! The mixing and mastering is good already but you can improve every time because nobody is perfect!!! If you vote back for my remix of "Give Up Yo' Girl" you would make me so happy!!! Thanks!
Live Sound Device
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4 years ago
Always be proud of your music!! Sounds good, Voted! Please check our song " Dutchess " and its Video on YouTube. If you'd like, follow us on SoundCloud, we'll follow you back!